10 June 2008 @ 09:15 pm
FIC: Worshipped (H/D; PG-13; 900)  

Jam!porn is ... indecipherable. But I wanted frotting. And fluff. And I WANTED TO WRITE! So, this is what happens when I'm needy and sitting outside in my mother's orchard. And the day is all sunny and warm. I'm ONE with nature, man! I'm also a sap. So here's quite pointless sap. (I was writing this the entire day. O.O *collapses* I'm actually very happy with it, but I am, you know, extra sappy and woozy. /a lame attempt at justification) All typos are intentional. (Okay, okay, they're not.)


Fandom: Harry Potter
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is owned by J.K. Rowling and Warner Brothers. No copyright infringement intended.
Title: Worshipped
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~900
Status: Complete
Summary: Harry wonders whether Draco knows how Harry feels. Draco is kinda silly like that too. They're both silly and sappy, and that is, at least, an accurate summary if not a very enticing one.
Warnings: FLUFF, FLUFF, FLUFF. Also, sap.
Note: Written for [livejournal.com profile] awdt's prompt Shut, key, red, ocean, sour.


Worshipped

 

Harry never expected this.

He never thought he would be worshipped like this while he lay down on the soft blanket that was placed carefully on the still damp grass — freshly mowed and filling the air with the sweet scent, as the warmth of the morning sun struggled to dry it.

The air was humid, but an occasional breeze swayed the tree branches above him, making stray sprinkles of water, left strewed upon the trees by the night's rain, shimmer on the leaves; like precious gems gleaming white amidst the green. Harry shivered with them, not so much from the cold that was cooling the exposed skin of his chest, but more from the touch of soft fingers that trailed lazy circles over his stomach.

The sparkling leaves had nothing on the glimmer of bright blond hair that framed the face that Harry grew to love. The long strands softened the sharp features, making the pale skin shine with it; or perhaps that was a simple illusion. Perhaps it was merely the adoring look in the grey eyes that made Harry feel like he was looking straight into the sun.

The fingertips on his stomach moved upwards, over muscle and skin, pausing at the sensitive brown peak that hardened immediately underneath the soft touch. Full lips followed the progress of teasing fingers, the gentle kisses audible and wet; making Harry dig his heels into the ground, so he could raise his hips in a silent plea, though he was hardly aware he was doing so.

The light became too bright and Harry shut his eyes as hot mouth closed around one of his nipples, sucking lightly, but with increasing intensity. Sensations ran through him — a powerful mix of wishing this would rush forward to its completion and hoping that the feeling would linger and never end. The lips moved to deliver scorching kisses over Harry's neck — open-mouthed kisses, combined with a sharp edge of teeth and skilful swipes of a wicked tongue, as eager to entice Harry as they were intent on marking his skin. Soft hair tickled Harry's jaw, and he inhaled deeply — the alluring whiff of pine-scented shampoo assaulting Harry's senses, making him feel like he was somewhere near the ocean. He even thought that he could feel the waves crashing as weight settled between his thighs, pressing down firmly and then easing off; but they were waves of pleasure, threatening to take him away and make him lose himself as they drove him towards his peak.

Harry wanted this to last, so he stilled his hips, capturing the body above him with his legs in attempt to slow things down. But his treacherous hands sneaked lower to slide beneath the soft fabric and touch the sweat-slicked skin of the delicately curved spine. The panting man above him shuddered, speeding up his moments; hips circling and pressing unceasingly. Harry reached even lower to cup and knead hard mounds of the man's buttocks, still clad in trousers; but a faint moan told Harry his touch was appreciated nonetheless. It became too much and Harry pressed the man closer too him, holding the warm, trembling body in a desperate grip, as his toes curled and pleasure spread through him, wrenching a cry from his lips.

He lay still, trying to catch his breath, gasping and shivering from aftershocks that continued to send sparks of pleasure through his body. When he opened his eyes, the sky was still clear and blue above him; an occasional maple key spinning like a helicopter on the wind, graciously evading them and falling somewhere beyond Harry's sight, as though unwilling to disturb the peace of the two motionless figures lying on the grass.

The blond head rose and grey eyes looked down on him, and Harry again wondered at this change. Long gone was the sour-tempered, insolent youth, only to be replaced by a man with loving eyes and easy smiles. But as he stared up at the flushed cheeks and lips — almost looking red after their dedicated adoration of Harry's body — he couldn't care less about why this happened, he could only feel grateful it had.

Harry reached up to tuck away a stray lock of hair behind an ear, but the motion turned out to be in vain because Draco leaned in to press his lips to Harry's, and the disobedient lock fell on Harry's cheek, tickling him mercilessly. The slow kiss still felt like a wondrous exploration, even though this was hardly their first, and it still made the feeling of absolute contentment settle deep within Harry, reminding him that he had never expected this. Never expected to lie down to be teased with endless kisses and caresses, until he forgot where he was and forgot that the sun was the one giving light. Harry wondered whether Draco knew what he was doing to him. Did he know that every touch and every kiss felt like worship? Felt like love?

Draco lifted his head again and looked down with a smile.

The wind dried the sweat of their bodies, and Harry's hearing returned though he didn't remember losing it, but the rustling of leaves seemed louder and Draco's breathing seemed more like gasping, and Harry thought he could hear Draco's heart beating against his chest.

"What?" Harry asked, after Draco showed no intention of letting his smile slip, but continued to gaze down with an indecipherable expression.

"You," Draco said reverently, leaning for another long, more passionate kiss, startling Harry with the sudden intensity, leaving him breathless like a teenager after his first kiss. "You make me feel ..." Draco paused and considered, and then, looking amazed and grateful, concluded, "Worshipped."


Fin


 

 
 
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[identity profile] kaykayen.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
Lord, woman, whatever you WANT you should definitely have (and share with us)! This is gorgeous! The details are so lovely and intricate! And Draco's parallel feelings at the end was a beautiful frame to the fic.

faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
*snuggles you silly* Thank you so much, sweetie!
[identity profile] aprettyeternity.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 07:36 pm (UTC)
Simply amazing. That's all I can really say at the moment. Wow. : )
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! ♥
[identity profile] heathen-arcade.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
Ah! This is just beautiful! The pacing is perfect for the mood.

Sap, you say?! If so, it's the $15/oz Vermont gourmet of sap.
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I was worried, it's not porn (aliens help me with that).

If so, it's the $15/oz Vermont gourmet of sap.

Yay! Pricey sap! *is pleased*
[identity profile] paige51066.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 07:56 pm (UTC)
"the still damp grass — freshly moaned and filling the air"

Moaned should me mowed?

Though "moaned" provides some...interesting...imagery.
[identity profile] paige51066.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 07:57 pm (UTC)
Or...is it one of those "intentional" typos?
(no subject) - [identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:03 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] paige51066.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:13 pm (UTC)
Gaaaaawww. So sweet.
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! With moaning grass and all. :D

And it's so so sweet you corrected me quickly. Before you even read it! *snuggles*
[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:39 pm (UTC)
*gives wistful sigh*

Oh, to be worshipped that way. Nice how Draco says out loud the same thing Harry is thinking. *loves*
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:16 pm (UTC)
Oh, to be worshipped that way.

That was my thought process. I has grass, I has sun — give me snuggles!

Thank you! *hugs*
[identity profile] winter-june.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:55 pm (UTC)
Oh, so beautiful! The images and the emotions are so vivid. And Draco's last line, implying their shared feelings... just wonderful!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:17 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thank you so much! *snuggles you*
[identity profile] alice-msweasley.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:16 pm (UTC)
Beautiful!
Really, it made me feel so... peaceful.
And the boys so into each other emotions... gah!
<3
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
Really, it made me feel so... peaceful.

Then I've written MY current mood correctly! Sunny day and green stuff make me happy and peaceful. (I tried to write porn actually, but ...)

*smooches*

Thank you, hon!
[identity profile] awayfromlife.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:58 pm (UTC)
Sweet, sweet fluff, how I love thee!:) This was lovely and adorable. They seem so content and like they've been together forever, with the 'telepathy' snd all. If this is sap, then I'll read only sap from now on.:D
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:20 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I stand by my assessment that this is sap. But I like sap. :D *basks in sappy thoughts*
[identity profile] micolerose.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 10:49 pm (UTC)
making Harry dug his heels into the

dig?

an intentional typo I'm sure!

now that the boring editing bit's done...this was great! cute! normally 'm not one for sap but I like your fics so I try to read them all (but I admit 'm horrible about commenting, sorry)... anyway the POINT is I'm glad I read it =)

and it helps too that the day you're describing is outside my french doors =P
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:23 am (UTC)
an intentional typo I'm sure!

Naturally, naturally. (Thanks! :D)

Yay! Thank you so much! *blushes* Glad you read it and decided to comment!

Pretty day made me write it. *nods*
[identity profile] zebrui.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 10:51 pm (UTC)
I'm wearing my everything-is-all-right-with-the-world smile right now.
Welcome back on board! It's good to see aliens were quick with their persuasive techniques :) More than quick!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:25 am (UTC)
Thank you! *snuggles*

I suspect someone sent the aliens to stalk me. *nods*
[identity profile] sassy-cissa.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 12:59 am (UTC)
That is stunning and beautiful. The imagery is spectacular. *adores*
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:25 am (UTC)
Thank you, love! Glad you liked it! *adores right back*
[identity profile] transitive111.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:51 am (UTC)
God, are you sure this wasn't supposed to be called "Worship me"? Because we do. Amazing, simply amazing.

One quick thing: "a powerful mix of whishing" should be "wishing" unless you were using some oddly placed onomatopoeia :P
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:29 am (UTC)
God, are you sure this wasn't supposed to be called "Worship me"?

Shhhhh. Don't tell anyone!

*laughs and blushes* Thank you so much!

Damn. Whish/wish is on my list of recurring typos along with form/from and tired/tried. I usually find&replace them. *slaps self* Thank you!
[identity profile] aldehyde.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:48 am (UTC)
gack! soooooooooo intense! i love the slow exploration and how the tension just builds and builds. lovely work, as always :)
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:30 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! *preens at the 'as always' comment* :D
(no subject) - [identity profile] aldehyde.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 04:11 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 04:24 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [identity profile] aldehyde.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] ladydeth12.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:49 am (UTC)
This is so completely beautiful! I love your description and imagery you create in this short. There's so much emotion you've put into such few words that add to the intenseness of this.

Amazing as always dear!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:34 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, hon!

*tries hard to contain her sudden preening*

(I want to snuggle your icon so much! *snuggles*)
[identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 05:17 am (UTC)
*sighs and swoons*
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:35 am (UTC)
*picks you up* On your feet and go write porn! ♥
[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 05:22 am (UTC)
This was so amazing and brilliant hun :)
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:36 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, love! *hugs*
[identity profile] shawn-anne.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 09:58 am (UTC)
Oh, I definitely missed you! The above fic confirms it! It was just fantastic! I loved the attention to details and the play of emotions. Wonderful, love!

*hugs you*
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:39 am (UTC)
*hugs you harder*

Thank you so much! You're too sweet!(And oddly enough you're not being a slave driver! :D)

*snuggles*
[identity profile] bryoneybrynn.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:23 pm (UTC)
Oh oh oh! The sweetness. I love an awestruck Harry, still only half-believing he can have such things. There was a lovely sense of innocence to this, all love and sweet sensation and I don't know how to describe it but it was lovely.

Yay!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:31 pm (UTC)
*hugs* Thank you so much, sweetie!

I hope you're feeling better! *snuggles you*
[identity profile] siyvana.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:43 pm (UTC)
Beautiful. I love their shared emotions and thoughts! ♥
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 04:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, sweetie!
[identity profile] irishcarbomb730.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 09:54 pm (UTC)
This was so lovely! I really enjoyed reading it - you capture their love so beautifully. Just a note - "man with loving eyes and easy similes" - I'm sure Draco has an excellent grasp of the English language, but otherwise, not so sure that was your intent. :)
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 10:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!

It's amazing how that i hurts my eyes now and I didn't even see it before. *shakes head* Thank you!
[identity profile] alaana-fair.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 03:44 am (UTC)
Aww... this was fabulous, hon! So emotional and stirring and yet such a simplistic little snippit of their lives. And a perfect, perfect ending!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 09:06 am (UTC)
Thank you, love! It's kind of you to call it emotional instead of sappy! :D :D :D
(no subject) - [identity profile] alaana-fair.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] byaghro.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 05:25 am (UTC)
*sighs happily* That was absolutely beautiful! Thank you SO MUCH for sharing your peaceful, contented sap! I'm very fond of your sap. *pets sap* *wrinkles nose* *sneaks off to wash hands* LOL!

Long gone was the sour-tempered, insolent youth, only to be replaced by a man with loving eyes and easy smiles. -- I LOVE this description of Draco!

So well done!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 09:06 am (UTC)
Yay for sap-sharing! :D

I like to think about older Draco feeling content and peaceful.

Thank you, hon! Glad you liked it!
[identity profile] nightlo.livejournal.com on June 14th, 2008 05:15 pm (UTC)
Though I like them hot and sexy (most of the time), it is the moment of love sharing, emotion exchange and showing affection that ties my heart to them...they have so many different possibilities of developing into some different from canon...I must admit, I cannot describe them like you, that's why you are really amazing!

Feeling back to normal already? No more side effects? (I know, I am nagging again...)
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 14th, 2008 08:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, love! Glad you liked it!

I feel much better! I'm still not jumping around, but I stopped being queasy and dizzy. :D
[identity profile] thrnbrooke.livejournal.com on June 28th, 2008 08:47 am (UTC)
Beautiful!
faithwood.livejournal.com[identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com on June 28th, 2008 02:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! <3