ext_140926 ([identity profile] kawanale.livejournal.com) wrote on March 11th, 2008 at 03:44 am
Cute!
Only The Marauder's Map shows the truth! Smart guy for Harry to look at the map before meeting "Jessie."

Just one little note, you wrote "Potter's voice hitched as he spoke. "I don't now why. I though we might as well..." I think you meant "Potter's voice hitched as he spoke. "I don't KNOW why..."
 
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