My favourite bits:
"Well, next time try to use your mouth not your hands."
Harry groaned inwardly, chasing away the unwanted images that Malfoy's innocent remark had created.
"I don't appreciate being manhandled like that," Malfoy continued. "I'd ask you to use your brain next time, but I suppose that would be too much to ask."
Harry kept silent, not daring to speak. His mind was full of thoughts in which he manhandled Malloy and used his hands and mouth in various ways.
Yes, yes, Harry. Onto the dirty thoughts. I mean, that's where MY MIND was going, after all. We all need to be on the same page here. And get Draco on it too. Chop chop!
Did that mean Malfoy would rather have him naked?
You are the QUEEN of one-liners, my love. OMG. I would so TOTALLY have come to the same conclusion, btw. *nods*
And...you know, sometimes, I really just try and let a story happen. I mean, it's fun to figure out what's going on before, you know, it's revealed, but I'm not really trying to figure out who the secret admirer is. I'm sure you'll tell us in due time. :) (Though, I might notice that you've switched over to Harry's POV as soon as the gifts had started arriving, and until I see Draco's POV without any mention of the gifts, well, one might just have to assume certain things...)
:D
♥!
P.S. Why do you feel guilty?
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