ext_70522 ([identity profile] three-fates1987.livejournal.com) wrote on February 10th, 2008 at 07:41 pm
Great piece. The humor in the beginning was spot-on for this set, I was laughing so much I had to read it twice to make sure I hadn't missed anything. And then the bedroom scene was just steamy, I had no idea a guy demanding begging could be so hot. I like that you allowed them a quite moment of bonding after the sex, before going back to the humor. I loved Hermoine in this story, so amusing. I wish we could see her stumble all over herself next time she sees Harry and Ginny.
 
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