ext_127657 ([identity profile] bryoneybrynn.livejournal.com) wrote on May 26th, 2008 at 08:36 pm
Not like it? Are you insane???? I adored it. It's one of my very favourite things you've ever written.

I loved this: He was just a friend until, during one of their study sessions, he pressed Draco against the bookshelves in the public library and kissed him. I just pulled the prompt 'bookshelf' out of my ass but it's inspiring much hot bookshelf!action.

And god, this!!: It was only after, when he was left alone, that Draco thought that maybe, just maybe, he had been in love with Ethan. Guh! Broke my heart in such a good way.

Not to mention this: Draco shrugged. "Sure." If Potter wanted sex, who was Draco to complain? It hardly mattered. And then, fuck, THIS: So, one night, Draco left to the pub and picked up a guy. They shagged in the bathroom, and when the guy left, Draco felt sick and he vomited all over the floor. I adored Draco in this. Adored!! God, I love the boys just a little bit broken. I think I have a sickness or something.

And Harry! Omfg, Harry!: Potter also liked to top, easily asserting control with gentleness and quiet intensity that had no more give than a steel door. Plus this: I ... did I do something wrong?" Potter almost whispered, sounding desperate. "I can fix it." *dies* That's how I like him, all right!! *dies more*

And then to end it like this? Draco cleared his throat and murmured, "I see." And it was true.

Love! Sheer, shining love!

Okay, so this comment mostly consisted of my quoting your own story back to you but what can I say? It was fantastic.

Thanks so much, babe!! *hugs you*







 
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