ext_128153 ([identity profile] cupboardwitch.livejournal.com) wrote on May 26th, 2008 at 07:57 pm
This is just wonderful!

The whole paragraph where Draco learned: He could have been happy if he had continued believing every word his mother and father said is just so spot on to how I see things finally getting through to him.

And the entire passage containing this: easily asserting control with gentleness and quiet intensity that had no more give than a steel door is probably the most accurate picture I have of Harry in bed I've ever read!

A really great story with a lovely happy ending.
 
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