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ext_80405 ([identity profile] alaana-fair.livejournal.com) wrote on April 27th, 2008 at 09:22 pm
Mmm... very nice, hon! The end was a bit of a surprise. :-)

Just two little typos that I noticed:

Malfoys asked quietly. s/b Malfoy

there was not turning back. s/b no



 
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