Oh my dear sweet lord. I actually teared up a little when I got to the end of this.
I love how you take a format that's been done before--this little episodic, angst- and guilt-ridden affair between the boys--and turn it around into something so right. Beginning with the sex (in under two paragraphs?! damn girl, you got talent...) and ending with anything but was wonderful--and I find myself oddly, absurdly pleased that they didn't kiss at the end.
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I love how you take a format that's been done before--this little episodic, angst- and guilt-ridden affair between the boys--and turn it around into something so right. Beginning with the sex (in under two paragraphs?! damn girl, you got talent...) and ending with anything but was wonderful--and I find myself oddly, absurdly pleased that they didn't kiss at the end.
Brava, beautiful. ♥